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I'm heavy on your shoulders
I'm a weight in your arms
I'm a concrete foundation
I'm an iron charm

I've been battered and bruised
And haunted by my past
The memories, they're taunting me
Oh trust me, they're vast

I can't begin to tell you
But trust me, I've tried
I had the words ready
But yet again, I lied

I promised you honesty
To never lie to you
But really, what's wrong?
I haven't got a clue

I'm a mass of confusion
I'm a muddled mess
But believe me when I say
That I can't love you any less

These emotions are suffocating
All bottled up inside
And let me tell you now
You're in for a bumpy ride

This roller-coaster inside
Is starting to rust and break
It's leaving a hole in me
And oh, how it aches

And when I say I love you
Yes, trust me, I do mean it
But it's never been a blessing
Dooming all those who hear it
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The flow to this piece is great. The first stanza is amazing and creative to me. A piece I think everyone can relete too. More people should read your work. You write well.
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MaraJayne95 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :D i only write from experience, so i didn't think my work was that good, but i'm glad you think so :)
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